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Hiding Under Deepening Shades by ~kchan:iconkchan:



Look at the sunlight
As it filters through the tall grasses
With tufted ends like quill pens
Lions’ tails and kangaroo mice
Waving in the wind

I’m hiding from you
While you stay in the building
Just beyond the field
I’ll wait in the grass until you leave
And I’ll sit under the barren branches
Of trees and power poles
They stretch as far as they can
To reach that great blue expanse
And the pale yellow sun
With slight sepia rings
A single dot of white
That could be a lonely star
An antisocial cloud
Or a mark on a photograph

I’m hiding from you
Because I don’t want you to see
Just how much
I’m willing to sacrifice
And how far
I’m willing to go
India ink shadows
Stretching out around me

I’m hiding from you
And from myself
Behind a screen of
Waving tall grasses
Under deepening shades blue
©2004-2009 ~kchan
:iconkchan:

Author's Comments

I wrote this after looking at [link] by michelano

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:iconkyuuketsukikei:
:hug: Yay! More poetry from Kchan! I want you to publish a book so I can buy it. e_e I love your vocabulary. So pretty. n_n
:iconkchan:
<((.n)>

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Forever after, The End.
:iconperfume-v:
This is gorgeous. I love it.
:iconkchan:
It thinks YOU'RE gorgeous, and it loves you, too x3

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Forever after, The End.
:iconhchan:
You're beautifulIMEAN..uh..this.. th...this is beautiful...haha ... ha.............

But really, it is.

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"...there can be only JUAN!"
- some stupid idiots... [lol]

check out my webcomic, it still has the new car smell...
:iconkchan:
Thank you, My Love x3

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Forever after, The End.
:iconmichelano:
Ohhh, thank you so much! :hug: this is amazing, :clap:! you must be realy crazy to do this! and the unbelievable thing is, that this is the second time you did that, great, absolutly great! I'm speechless! the poetry suits very well to the pic, it makes it alive! In the future i will always think of you when i'm going to shot a pic, because of maybe beeing inspirating you again!
So thanks again for the support and have a good night, my friend! :bye:
:iconkchan:
You're welcome =3

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Forever after, The End.

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